A Poem Of Friendship

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A Poem Of Friendship

Postby ROBERTDAVIDSON » Mon Feb 13, 2006 9:55 am



A Poem Of Friendship

by Robert Davidson


to escape the prison of my skull
you have become a necessary part of me
lurking on the fringes of my dream

relationships i find are vast deserts
demanding all, challenging all
and for that purpose we are given one another

left to myself i become inward, morose
whipped by self-pity's bitter lash
so when the ultimate separateness of soul frightens me
i return gratefully to the sympathy of touch

a friend of entirely different temperament
becomes a relief from the monotony of personality
a balm for the wounds of human love

now i know the thoughts of your heart before you speak them
our solitudes broken
i guard your privacy in fear of my own

Copyright 2006

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Postby Colin » Mon Feb 13, 2006 10:31 am

:eek:
Hi Robert,

A second really excellent post by you !!
Can't wait for another !

:eek:
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Postby K » Fri Feb 17, 2006 1:49 am

Sorry Robert,

This poem is full of abstractions and reads like a Teen journal.

Seems to offer nothing for the reader to relate too, outside self-pity.

Boring.
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Postby Clare » Fri Feb 17, 2006 10:00 am

:wink:

Well I think you maybe got out of bed the wrong side this morning K ?

This is a personal introspective poem with much more skill and thought than any teen journal could possibly muster.

Maybe not to everybody's sensibilities but I do like it Robert.

:wink:
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Postby Cleo » Sat Feb 18, 2006 12:52 pm

Clare wrote::wink:

Well I think you maybe got out of bed the wrong side this morning K ?

:wink:


Yeah I agree with that, bit like a bad hair day thingy or one of those watchamacalit days.

Cannot find any of Colin’s prose to compare with Roberts?
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Postby Adam » Fri Mar 24, 2006 4:14 pm

:eek:
Well that really was a short poem ?
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