WRITTEN FOR MY 10TH ANNIVERSARY.

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WRITTEN FOR MY 10TH ANNIVERSARY.

Postby Rybo75 » Thu Dec 10, 2009 5:04 am

A LOVE THAT NEVER DIES

WELL, I GUESS I NEVER THOUGHT,
THAT I WOULD LIVE TO SEE THIS DAY,
AND NEVER REALLY DREAMT,
THAT THINGS WOULD GO MY WAY,
SOMEWHERE DEEP WITHIN MY SOUL,
I HELD ON TO YOUR HEART.
AND KNEW, EACH TIME I SAW YOUR FACE,
THAT WE WOULD NEVER PART.

THERES NEVER BEEN A MOMENT,
MY MIND WAS NOT ON YOU,
EACH LIVING BREATHING SECOND,
SPENT KNOWING THIS LOVES TRUE,
EACH TEAR WE SHED, EACH SMILE WE SHARED,
EACH TIME WE BOTH FELT PAIN
AND KNOWING THAT THROUGHOUT IT ALL,
THERES NOT ONE THING I’D CHANGE.

FOR OUR JOURNEY BROUGHT US HERE,
TRAVELLED HIGHS, AND TRAVELLED LOWS,
CROSS THE MOUNTAIN TOPS, AND VALLEYS DEEP,
WHERE THE BLOOD FILLED RIVERS FLOW,
THE CHOICES MADE, THROUGH WILDER TIMES,
ARE PLATED WITH REGRET,
AND MEMORIES, LIKE CANDLES,
WILL BURN FOR SOME TIME YET.

I’M THANKFULL FOR MISTAKES IVE MADE,
IM GLAD OF PAIN IVE FELT,
IM PROUD I NEVER THREW MY HAND,
WHICHEVER CARDS WERE DEALT.
AS I GAZE ‘PON YOUR SOUL,
THROUGH THE FIRE IN YOUR EYES
I KNOW WE BOTH DESERVE TO SHARE,
THIS LOVE THAT NEVER DIES


I WOULD GREATLY APPRECIATE YOUR COMMENTS GOOD OR BAD. THANKS.

RYBO75.
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Re: WRITTEN FOR MY 10TH ANNIVERSARY.

Postby allmost » Thu Dec 10, 2009 10:05 am

:crazy:

Hi Rybo75,

Great that you have posted such a lot of good stuff here in the early hours.

I read your Soft Son first, then your Written For My 10th Anniversery and Damn Emotion.
Clearly reflections of what commonly constitutes that impossible thing, a human life.

Love those three poems of your Rybo and will be back read more of them later when I get more time.

:crazy:
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Re: WRITTEN FOR MY 10TH ANNIVERSARY.

Postby Rybo75 » Thu Dec 10, 2009 9:02 pm

Thank you, just thought I'd post a few and guage reactions, lol, if anybody enjoys them thats great, if not, I would still like the critcism. So feel free to be honest!
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