Home sweet Home

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Home sweet Home

Postby Rybo75 » Sat Jun 20, 2009 1:43 am

Home sweet home

Hometown, Skyline,
Chimney stacks, yellow smoke.
Boarded windows, rancid bus stops,
Cigarette butts, can of coke.

T-J woz ere,
’97, ’98,
So woz Tommo, in 2000,
Tattooed knuckles, love and hate.

High street shopping, white washed windows,
Fish and chips, pizza box,
Car alarm, baseball caps,
Empty sheds, broken locks.

Tracky bottoms, dirty faces,
Filthy mouths, robbing shops.
Down the alley, through the bushes,
Round the flats, knackered cops.

Business minded, dirty dealings,
Dodgy sellers, highest bids.
Dark street corners, pass the parcel,
Pills and potions for the kids.

After hours, twitching curtains,
Watching shadows, fear to tread.
Broken streetlight, footsteps follow,
Flash of silver, left for dead.


I WOULD GREATLY APPRECIATE YOUR COMMENTS GOOD OR BAD. THANKS.

RYBO75.
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