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My little song for Music GCSE

Postby princess_tigger » Tue Jan 18, 2005 11:21 pm

i wrote this little song for my gcse and i was wondering how many people liked it? so this is it. it's called I wish

As I sit and wait for you.
Seconds turn to minutes,
Minutes turn to hours,
Without you.

As I look out my window,
All I see is your face,
Sinking with the sun,
Without you.

As I look back on all the good times,
My heart begins to sink,
Every moment of everyday,
I wish I could re-live,
Over a million times or more,
I wish to be with you.

can someone plz help me finish it as i have an ending but its rubbish and i was wondering if anyone could help me. plz

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Postby Digiwizz » Wed Jan 19, 2005 10:19 am

:hohoho:
I love the song princess-tigger, and maybe it could have an ending some thing like this ;

Without you.

As I sit and wait for you.
Seconds turn to minutes,
Minutes turn to hours,
Without you.

As I look out of my window,
All I see is your face,
Sinking with the sun,
Without you.

As I look back on all the good times,
My heart begins to sink,
Every moment of everyday,
I wish I could re-live,
Over a million times or more,
I wish to be with you.

Now I've told you how I feel,
and you feel the same way too.
I'm just waiting for this plane
that will fly me back to you.
Knowing soon I will not be
Without you.
Darling soon I will not be
Without you.

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Postby princess_tigger » Wed Jan 19, 2005 6:35 pm

thanks it sounds great it was a big help i had and ending but it didn't sound any good and i just wanted to see what other people thought and what they could come up with and i like it so you don't mind if i use it do u? :grin:
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Postby Digiwizz » Wed Jan 19, 2005 10:34 pm

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Sure. Glad you like it, use away.

If you write anything else, do tell us.
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Postby princess_tigger » Thu Jan 20, 2005 6:33 pm

ive worte loads but at the minute i dont feel like writting songs coz of some stuff and my best friend moving thanks again
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Postby princess_tigger » Thu Jan 20, 2005 7:43 pm

i have an idea why dont we all write part of a song if anyone else u know whats to help then ask them to help.
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Postby Digiwizz » Fri Jan 21, 2005 11:00 am

A great idea princess-tigger.
If I start a song then anyone can add a line or two, or a verse or two. And anyone else can add a bit more. What about this for a song start ;

It hurts when you play.

It hurts when you play,
when you play with my heart.
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Postby princess_tigger » Sun Jan 23, 2005 3:46 pm

coz every time you play that game in the end we know who wins
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Postby Digiwizz » Sun Jan 23, 2005 4:42 pm

OK,

It hurts when you play.

It hurts when you play,
when you play with my heart,
coz every time you play that game
in the end we know who wins.
I'm the one who sticks with love
and you're the one who sins.
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Postby Clare » Sun Jan 23, 2005 10:39 pm

And maybe,

It hurts when you play.

It hurts when you play,
when you play with my heart,
coz every time you play that game
in the end we know who wins.
I'm the one who sticks with love
and you're the one who sins.

It hurts when you play,
when you play with other girls,
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Postby princess_tigger » Mon Jan 24, 2005 9:07 pm

it hurts when play with my feeling as you know how i want to be with you but you dont want me too.
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Postby Digiwizz » Mon Jan 24, 2005 11:00 pm

Then maybe ,

It hurts when you play.

It hurts when you play,
when you play with my heart,
coz every time you play that game
in the end we know who wins.
I'm the one who sticks with love
and you're the one who sins.

It hurts when you play,
when you play with other girls,
hurts when you play with my feelings
as you know exactly how
I want to be with you
but you don't want me now.
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Postby GrimDad » Thu Jan 27, 2005 4:01 pm

What about this ?

It hurts when you play.

It hurts when you play,
when you play with my heart,
coz every time you play that game
in the end we know who wins.
I'm the one who sticks with love
and you're the one who sins.

We all like playing a game or two
and we do all like to have fun.
But you're playing games at my expense
and if you don't stop that now you're done.
You'll just end having to play with yourself
if you can't learn how to be true.

It hurts when you play,
when you play with other girls,
hurts when you play with my feelings
as you know exactly how
I want to be with you
but you don't want me now.

It hurts when you play,
when you play with my heart,
so please please learn to be true.
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Postby Digiwizz » Fri Feb 18, 2005 2:33 pm

:bunny:
PS,
Princess-Tigger when you get your music GCSE result, do tell us how you did !!
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