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Postby K » Fri Jun 29, 2007 4:22 am

A few weeks away
although propitious
would lengthen the
gap we try to close
between ourselves.
Should irony be the
two and fro, the very
balance of us?
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Re: seesaw

Postby Colin » Wed Jun 04, 2008 1:38 pm

Hi K,

I like what you are trying to say here, though I do find the end a bit of a puzzle.
Is 'two and fro' a typo for 'to and fro' or intended ?
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