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seesaw

PostPosted: Fri Jun 29, 2007 4:22 am
by K
A few weeks away
although propitious
would lengthen the
gap we try to close
between ourselves.
Should irony be the
two and fro, the very
balance of us?

Re: seesaw

PostPosted: Wed Jun 04, 2008 1:38 pm
by Colin
Hi K,

I like what you are trying to say here, though I do find the end a bit of a puzzle.
Is 'two and fro' a typo for 'to and fro' or intended ?